.Saturday, April 19, 2008 ' 3:24 AM Y
& your love is all i ever wanted
Random-ness (jenny and me 3)Surrender you heart
Relinquish your soul
Free your spirt
Compormise your freedom (spoil the flow rite -.- jenny's fault xP)
Compromise your goal (sounds better? changed to this ><)
Your mere existence
Irks my soul
Holds me shackled
Within your hold (changed jenny's line -.- couldn't read what was written)
Afraid of loneliness
Cause for alarm
A shell of false pretense
To keep out the harm (changed also, since i couldn't read jenny's writing again -.-)
My fall will be for you
It tore my heart right through
Felt your blade
A sharp pain
And i am slain
A shell of false pretense
An eternal facade
An expressionless mask
Her existence a farce
No longer does she thrust (best para as yet , in this "poem" that is)
She's living my dream
She faces my wrath
I want revenge
But thee blocked my path
Now my rage will singe
Deep within
Lying beneath
The underlying truth
Will be revealed
The secret killed
Ok I know this "poem" sucked even more than the front few.
Like duh.
There was no topic at all, not to mention there is no pattern to it.
Just random phrases that stood out from the norm, which we had in mind.
So we just wrote it as it went.
There is no link throughout these paragraphs.
~ 3xil3 ~
